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Manuscript Review and Evaluation

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100 per unit - Virtual OK - Posted Jan 13, 2017

I will read a manuscript of a fiction novel at any stage of the editing process and give you quality feedback to help you get to the next stage. I will evaluate it according to genre and style clarified beforehand during correspondence with you, and give you positive and encouraging advice based on my experience as both a reader and a fellow writer. I will give you feedback to help you excel in the following areas:

- Overall plot structure and arc
- Scene structure and sub-plot weaving
- Character realism and development arcs
- Setting/milieu realism and development
- Thematic consistency and presentation
- Voice, style, and general wordsmithing skill
- Premise and core story question

I will let you know what I liked about the story, what I see can be improved upon, and suggestions on how to go about it.

It will take me up to a month to guarantee time to read and formulate my evaluation of a full-length novel, with my busy schedule. I also reserve the right to refuse at any time during the reading to cease my evaluation due to excessively offensive content (I won't evaluate erotica, pretty much).

Training & Qualifications


I am the founder and past owner of a writing community (www.holyworlds.org), an experienced blogger (www.whythawye.me, and priorly siremethmimetes.wordpress.com), an Advanced Communicator Silver and Competent Leader with Toastmasters International, and the Public Relations and Marketing Manager for Penoaks Publishing (www.penoaks.com). I have worked with counseling and editing many fictional writings at multiple stages of their progress for many years. I am an avid reader who has consumed literally thousands of books from dozens of genres.

Availability & Preferences


I'm usually free in the evenings other than Tuesdays, and mornings on Mondays, Fridays, and the weekends.

Trading Preference: I’m flexible, just hit me up!

Reviews of Jaymes


David left review for Jaymes
Mar 24, 2019
Well I thought things were going great, Jaymes is very kind and intelligent. Life may have gotten in the way (understandable) however, it's simply una...cceptable to completely ignore people who are counting on you for your services. I will not consider working with Jaymes in the future as our deal was due to be completed months ago. I've tried to be patient and understanding but communication is lacking heavily and I'm completely unaware of why. Keep this in mind before considering a deal with Haynes.show more
May 21, 2017
Jaymes did an awesome job providing me with valuable input that was both encouraging and constructive.
Nov 09, 2020
I had a wonderful conversation with Jaymes, full of insight and sparks. I certainly recommend his services and look forward to having more conversatio...ns with him. show more
Apr 17, 2019
Jaymes is an encouraging and thoughtful reader! :)
Casia provided Help with Writing Advice Articles or Videos for Jaymes
Apr 03, 2019
It's always fun to connect with and help out other writers! Best of luck Jaymes, glad I could help you.
Feb 26, 2019
Jaymes is amazing as always when it comes to reviewing my short stories and helping with brainstorming sessions! :)
Jan 29, 2019
Jaymes was speedy with his response, and I appreciate his analysis of my writing! He helped me confirm that I was on the right path with revisions. If... you need an insightful reader for your fiction, send your story to Jaymes! :)show more
Jan 24, 2019
Jaymes gave me excellent feedback and encouragement on my short story! I now realize what I need to change to make my story more cohesive and impactfu...l. I would definitely use his services again, and I highly recommend him to other wirters!show more
Nov 12, 2018
Jaymes had some awesome ideas to help me work through the problems in my novel
Adrian provided Help with Writing Advice Articles or Videos for Jaymes
Mar 06, 2018
Easy deal & a pleasant person!


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