After a long journey I've finished my first novel, Burden. A 123,000 word epic fantasy romance for New Adults.
I'm trying to grab attention and reputation with it before publishing and am seeking eyes on my first chapter. Afterward, if you liked what you read, please comment on the bottom of the website! If you found grammatical errors or suggestions please message directly

Alden knew living in the Shadowen Thieves Guild would come with a price, but when their latest target became the Princess of Ammos, he knew he couldn't pay. Taking the risk, he turns on his guild to return home the one person able to free the innocent Kingdom of Brimley—if only she would see to reason.
Trust and Valor are tested as Princess Mayli is faced with the quandary to flee or stay with the mysterious man. When so many Brimleyn refugees are out for revenge, it was her rogue who acted like a shield. But why would her enemy sacrifice himself when it was she who called for war?

Chapter one: The Ambush
"Squirrel’s eyes beamed as if he’d just found the lost treasure of Gezmek..."
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