Hello, just looking for a listener of something im working on, Im afraid im deaf to my own mistakes, ive listened to it so many times, i cant tell if it sounds strange, poorly composed, bad this bad that, or if its altogether uninteresting or uninspired.

of course, i would offer the same, should you be looking for a serious critique, or even help, i have music programs, i could add effects, cut mix and splice, or anything you might be needing, i would greatly appreciate it, thank you