“ are internal tokens (with no value in dollars) that allow members to receive credit for help they provide to non-profits or individual Simbi members, without having to exchange talents directly.
Writing Critique
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I will critique your writing, be it an essay or a novel. I can provide a critique via email, voice chat, or by telephone. It's entirely your choice. I have a firm yet fair style of critiquing, so please only ask for my help if you are prepared for the possibility that I may pick it to pieces.
I specialize in critiquing stories, but I can also make sure an essay is informative and well defended as well. Speech presentations are welcome as well. If you want a deep structural analysis, I'm your guy.
Some things I will NOT comment on:
Spelling and grammar problems (unless they are excessive)
The subject of your essay or the idea of your story
Some thigs I WILL comment on:
Factual accuracy (or believability if it is fantasy)
Characterization
World building
Pacing
Narrative quality
Strengths and weaknesses of arguments (for essays and presentations)
Lastly, I'm a nice guy with a big heart. I want to help you. I'm not going to tear anything apart or belittle you. I want to help you make the best work you can make and I cannot do that without respecting you and your work with complete honesty. :)
My rate is 25 simbi per hour. On average I can read about 10,000 words per hour. I will round my services based on the number of words to the nearest hour to a minimum of one hour. If your work is super short, we can absolutely work out something that is more fair.
Training & Qualifications
I am a self-published author and have sold my book at conventions. I also know what a zarf is. Anyone who knows what a zarf is wihout having to look it up is bound to have some writing talent, right? Right??
Availability & Preferences
My availability changes over time. We can work something out.
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